How to fix bad writing
So you’ve got a draft sitting on your desk. Your job is to proof it and send it along the chain. Perhaps higher up, or to a client. Or to publish.
But what you’ve got is not great. It’s just… okay… passable.
How do you make it great?
1) Turf the lot and start again
As agonising as it may be, it’s often easier than taking the original apart. This always makes it a bit awkward for telling the poor sod who wrote the first draft (even if that’s you). But it’s more time saving in the long run.